For this first pair of images, I looked to isolate the essential aspects of the shot, in this case the detail of the metalwork and the grain of the wood. I believe it is still clear what the subject is despite the crop, and has resulted in a stronger image.
The only change I would make would be to place the rivet slightly to the right, closer to the principal of the Golden Section.


For the tulips, again I focussed in on the two stems. I lost the diagonal line formed with the third head, but replaced this with a tighter crop onto the group of two. Cropping also make the background more abstract by cropping on a blurred area, emphasising the three dimensional effect of the heads.
For the image of the church, I cropped tightly to create a new image, noting the twist of the clouds around the spire and placing the cross at the golden triangle. This has a secondary implication, linking the church and what it represents to god up on high, looking down on the earth. Its no longer a 'postcard' image and by tightly cropping on one specific aspect of the shot, the image starts to have meaning.


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